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Here is my conclusion of my birthday in 2008

Here is my conclusion of my birthday in 2008

It’s just a game My purpose is to recount On 3 rd October 2008, it was my birthday. My friends and I went to Bowl Line. We all went in two cars, my mums and my Dad’s. We just went to have fun. When my friends and I (plus my sister) got there we were all excited. My sister just went “Yay, This will be fun.” So we all went in to get our shoes fitted. After we all got our shoes fitted, we started the game. The really cool thing was that everybody except my sister had these things that made the kids not bowl in to the gutters. So as the game went on my sister kept getting zeroes. Sadly I came second, but got a strike on the last go. I would recommend going to Bowl Line because I guarantee you will have a great time just like I did. I felt a bit depressed at coming second but hey, It's just a game.
 * W.A.L.T. I am learning to write a descriptive recount including an introduction and an conclusion **

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