Elise's+Recount



WALT We are learning to have a descriptive recount including an introduction and a conclusion.

It was the day I’ve been waiting for, just my bike and me. I was going to ride the bumpiest road (well it seemed to be.)

As I got up on to the rough seat and started to pedal, the started to blow. It was that hard I lost control and turned into a parked, but turned so tight away my knee touched the rocky, black road.

Just then I got my balance back and pedalled as fast as a spotty cheetah. Whoosh!!! Zoom!!! Whoosh!!!! As I turn the corners I leaned so tight I almost fell off! Finally it was time to go home, so I headed home in time for afternoon tea!

I'm most likely to never to do that again. I'd probably recommend that to someone that's better with a bike, but it was still the most euphoric day of my life!

** By Elise. **